Jhonatan Yecid Garcia Venegas.

A good descriptive paragraph is easy to write, it includes many vivid sensory details that paint a picture and appeals to all of the reader's senses of sight, hearing, touch, smell and taste when it is appropriate. Descriptive paragraph may also paint pictures of the feelings the person, place or thing invokes in the writer. A descriptive paragraph will usually focus on a single event, a person, a location or an item. When you write your paragraph, it is your job to convey your idea about that topic through your description of that topic and the way that you lay things out for your reader. You need to show your reader (not tell them) what you are trying to describe by illustrating a picture in their mind’s eye very carefully. Your paragraph needs to be structured in a manner that helps your topic to make sense. If you are describing an event, you will need to write your paragraphs in chronological order. If you are writing about a person or a place you need to order the paragraphs so that you start off in a general manner and then write more specific details later. Your introductory paragraph sets the tone for the rest of the paragraph, so it needs to set out all of the main ideas that you are going to cover in your paragraph. Finally, the conclusion paragraph makes a summary of the entirety of your essay. This conclusion also needs to reaffirm your thesis (if necessary). Your conclusion needs to be well written because it is the final thing to be read by your reader and will remain on their mind the longest after they have read the remainder of your essay.
This is an example, I create:
The person I admire.

The most significant person in my life is hard-working, kind, pretty and warm-hearted, she is my mom the biggest hero in my life, she is my number one favorite person in the entire universe. My mom is in her late thirties, she is of medium height and she is Slim with large, dark, straight hair. She also has got a pale complextion with a few wrinkles and she has small, dark eyes with full lips and a friendly smile. Besides being well preserved for her age, she works very hard since she was 18 years old, and despite of the fact that she has not got a profesional degree, she is a dedicated person who seeks for punctuality and she is also a motivated, perseverant and social person in her job. She can do different things depending on the situation and she can accept difficult situations without getting angry. On the other hand, she is also a considerate,sympathetic, diplomatic, straight-forward and helpful person because she always thinks about other people when she does something or talks to someone, she understands and cares about other people’s problems, she is very good at trying to help people see both sides of a situation and she likes helping others. There is not doubt that no influence is so powerful as that of the mother who is generous, worker and take the place of all others but whose place no one else can take, a mother is a model to follow.




REFRENCES.
Ng, P. P.-t. (2003). Effective Writing. A Guide for Social Science Students. En P. P.-t. Ng, Effective Writing: A Guide for Social Science Students (pág. 9). China: THE CHINESE UNIVERSITY PRESS. Retrieved from https://books.google.com.co/books?id=y7lQTr8bMq4C&printsec=frontcover&dq=how+to+write+effectively&hl=es&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiknd24-v_dAhVFy1MKHZ3XBOsQ6AEIPTAD#v=onepage&q=how%20to%20write%20effectively&f=false.
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[Dan Sussman]. (2012, January 22). What is a paragraph? [Video File]. Retrieved from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mweXIEOZjQQ  





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